After writing the treatment I started writing my script. I chose the alternative set of events because I thought of it as more probable and mysterious. The first version was too much like Final Destination or it could lead into the Becky being delusional about her husband. Either way I thought that it would be too complicated to portray it properly in a short film.
I chose to leave a few things missing giving clues to what might happen but not saying that they will. A few loose ends that might intrigue the audience such as the newspaper or the different mugs.